Rookie Mistake(ON HOLD)

Rookie Mistake(ON HOLD)

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Prologue: I stood frozen, my back against the cold wall of the alleyway. Gio's warm breath danced across my skin, sending shivers down my spine. "Badness, yaah pre?" he whispered, his voice husky and tempting. I tried to push him away, but he sighed and pinned me against the wall. "Fi a likkle girl, you love give tough chat," he teased, his eyes glinting with amusement. Before I could respond, he leaned in, his lips attaching to my neck. I felt a rush of excitement mixed with fear. This was Giovanni, the type of boy my grandparents warned me about, and I was the church girl who was supposed to stay far away from him. But as his lips trailed kisses down my skin, I couldn't help but wonder... maybe I was tired of being the good girl. Maybe I was ready to take a walk on the wild side. And maybe, just maybe, Gio was the one to show me the way. "This a nuh something mi used to, a swear," I whispered, trying to sound convincing. But Gio just chuckled, his lips still attached to my skin, and I knew I was in trouble. I do not own any of the pictures used in this book. They all belong to the rightful owners.
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Moving In

Blaze White is the New Girl at the Prep school in her mothers old home town. But her only goal for senior year is to keep a low profile, no friends, no parties and NO boys. Axel may be adored and worshipped by his peer-but he hates people, except 5. So when a beautiful but closed off girl suddenly enters his group. He is not welcoming of the mysterious beauty despite the pull they both feel. •••• WARNING: This was written many moons ago. I have decided to put it back up because of a large request from readers. However, I was a kid when I wrote this so take it with a grain of salt. *** Like a deer in head lights, I freeze and watch as the car comes towards me expecting to get hit. But to my surprise, the car swerves to the side slightly next to me and comes to a stop. I take a deep breath I didn't know I was holding at the driver's side door swings open and a very pissed off Axel steps out. "Thank god," I mumble and place my hands on my knees to catch my breath. "Blaze?" He says and I hate it. I hate how he says my name as if it's his. Like he knows it's the only thing I want to hear, him calling out to me, looking at me, focused to me. It's the first time in my life I wanted someone's attention so badly I didn't care how I got it. And that was too dangerous for me to hold onto. "Are you insane or some shit? I could have killed you!" He says and starts to walk towards me. I take a big breath and step back away from him, "s-stop! Axel," I stutter still panting. It's then he notices the blood on my hands and shirt. "Is that blood?" He asks staring at my shirt and I take another step back. "Stop, stay b-back," I try to say confidently but I can't even breath right. Realizing he won't listen I start to turn around planning to make a break for it. "Don't run from me Blaze it won't go well," he growls reading my thoughts causing me to freeze in my spot. "Do not ever think you can get away from me."

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