A revisit of the Original, Dark(and Edgy!) BSO story, which was written in discord originally. Now rewritten in Wattpad without all of the discord limitations, and with a proper ending.
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Originally written in discord, it was inspired by the dark and somber atmosphere of the TNO submod for HOI4. However it was aimed at the Villager Rights community, and uses their MC characters and locations as characters and locations for the story. The story was conceived when I came up with a dark ending for a back then nonexistent story, but later when I saw it, I realized that there was potential for a story that would lead to that ending, and so BSO came to be. It was my first ever story I ever wrote, and was kinda cringe as I wrote as I went, and didn't plan anything which meant sometimes things were left unexplained. I then attempted to fix this with the now BSO: The Unfinished Cut story, where I copied and pasted the discord story and edited it as I went, but I added too much and didn't keep track so I got lost and gave up. BSO: Revolutionized aims to do what the Unfinished Cut failed to do, but in a more extreme way, keeping the beginning somewhat similar but then changing the stories trajectory so that it (somewhat) resembles a story instead of a bad fanfic which just wanted to be as edgy and "spooky" as possible. It may still be edgy but it's now a proper story.
This story was made for the Villager Rights community, though if you stumble upon this story, you can read it, it's just that you may not sympathize as much with the characters and you may have no idea how the places in the story look like, as it's assumed you, the reader, was there during S7 of the Villager Rights SMP. I still hope you can enjoy the story as some of the places described here didn't exist during S7 and I made them up.
Cover by Mitch from Villager Rights
Bad boy Adam Lawson is cursed never to know love until he's placed in a Mormon foster home and meets Thomas, an innocent boy who dares to love a monster no matter the cost. [Frankenstein meets 1985, the AIDS epidemic, and a bad boy desperate for love.]
ONC Main Prompt: 17 (chapter 1)
ONC Side prompt: 95 (chapter 6)
No. 37 Rank on "comingofage" tag 4/28/2024
No. 365 Rank on "monsters" tag 4/28/2024
No.11 Rank on "1985" tag 4/20/2024
No.85 Rank on "1980s" tag 4/20/2024
No.518 Rank on "wattpride" tag 4/20/2024
No. 541 Rank on "gayromance" tag 4/20/2024
Hit 1000 reads on 4/2/2024
No.2 Rank on "onc2024" tag 4/01/2024
No. 94 Rank on "freethelgbt" tag 4/01/2024
ONC Round One Qualifier! 3/06/2024
No.23 Rank on "Gothic" tag 2/23/2024
No.31 Rank on "comingoutofthecloset" tag 2/23/2024
No.2 Rank on "fittingin" tag 2/14/2024
I created my cover using Canva and the AI image creator from starryai app.