Demons Within

Hi this is my first story ever
Here is the start of the Prologue

I could only sit and watch as it took her. Paralysed by fear I watched as it destroyed her, drenching itself in her crimson blood. The tall slender being was pitch black from head to toe with fiery, red glowing eyes, with a glare that could drive anyone insane. It wore a black suit with a red tie and a black hat, the colours contrasting with his body. Its face looked like it was forged in the abyss of hell itself. As it played with its suffering victim a bone white smile appeared on its pure black lips, sending shivers down my spine, but seeing this also filled me with anger. I knew that it was a bad idea at the time but I could not sit here and watch her suffer for any longer.