Evil is out
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Last published Tue, Aug 27, 2024
When Tristan's family moves to a decrepit mansion in the middle of nowhere, they're hoping for a fresh start. But the house has secrets-fourteen doors adorned with ancient symbols, promising him an impossible wish.
As Tristan navigates the twisted halls, he faces supernatural trials that mirror his darkest fears and deepest regrets. In a chilling twist of fate, he discovers that the final key lies within a devastating sacrifice.
Can he be free of his past or will he die trying?
With so many strange things happening around the house, cryptic messages and strange people turned up at the house, revealing secret after secrets in the course of time.
How far would you go?
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