Savior
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TW: Thoughts of suicide Savior is a short story that I wrote for the We Read Youth Voices 2024 writing competition. It, unfortunately, was not chosen to be included in the anthology, but I still wanted to share it! 16-year-old Olivia Wattson lives a lonely life, with classmates that make fun of her and a mother who doesn't care for her. And the voices definitely do not help. They are always there with her, teasing her, filling her head with insults and lies. They make her life even more miserable than it already is--until one day, when they offer her a way out. Olivia eventually decides that she is going to escape this world forever. However, everything changes when Vanessa, the new kid at school, gives her a compliment; a seemingly meaningless act, but something capable of completely changing Olivia's mind. This story is about how simple acts of kindness can change someone's life.
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This is the story of an abused teenage girl, Maddie. Her need to die has become overwhelming and she is trying to find a way to help herself before she does something she may regret. The story is told from her point of view as she recalls all that has happened to her. Maybe telling her story will help her, maybe not. This isn't just any other sob story. This is more realistic. You may even find yourself comparing your life to Maddie's while reading this story. Disclosure: I wrote this as a 13-year-old and the writing is definitely not up to my current standards, but I feel as though changing what I have already written would take away from the emotion I put into this story at 13 years old. If you'd like an updated and more well-written version, please read my other story entitled "Remembering". TW/CW: domestic violence, child abuse, sexual assault, depression, anxiety, suicidal ideation

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