Deep Down
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  • Parts 9
  • Time 2h 14m
  • Reads 133
  • Votes 4
  • Parts 9
  • Time 2h 14m
Ongoing, First published Aug 16, 2024
Mature
Dennis, a charming teenager with deep blue eyes and blonde hair, has always been deeply connected to his family, especially his younger stepbrother, Reha. With an average build, Dennis is passionate about soccer and fiercely protective of those he loves. His bond with Reha, despite their two-year age difference, has always been special, marked by shared secrets and a unique understanding. But when a tragic accident during a seemingly ordinary day at an indoor swimming pool claims Reha's life, Dennis's world shatters.

Reha, a calm and sentient soul, seemed to have known his fate long before the tragedy struck. In the months leading up to his death, he shared wise and cryptic words with Dennis, speaking of life and its fleeting nature, as if he were preparing his brother for what was to come. Reha's serene demeanor and unique aura made him beloved by everyone who knew him, leaving an indelible mark on Dennis's heart.

Dennis's older brother, Denny, is a confident and charming young man with the same striking blonde hair and blue eyes. Muscular and athletic, Denny is the kind of person who lights up every room he enters. He is deeply devoted to his brothers, especially Dennis, whom he always supported and protected. Denny's love for basketball and his friendly, approachable nature have earned him the admiration of many, but his unwavering commitment to his family remains his greatest strength.

As Dennis struggles to come to terms with the devastating loss of Reha, he finds himself haunted by the memories of their time together and the unresolved feelings of guilt and grief. Denny, while grieving himself, tries to be the pillar of strength for Dennis, but even his unshakeable confidence can't fully mend the hole left by Reha's absence.

"Deep Down" is a poignant tale of brotherhood, loss, and the enduring power of love...
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