Fanfiction: Analysis and Review
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Changes ➵ Draco x Reader
Y/n L/n was a quiet girl, she liked to keep her circle small. She came from a wealthy family. Her parents were both Slytherin, so naturally she was sorted into Slytherin as well. That's when she befriended Pansy Parkinson and Daphne Greengrass. Pansy and Y/n had always been closer to each other. Both being the only child, they became like sisters. When Pansy finds out one of her other friends has feelings for Y/n, she takes it upon herself to make them a couple. Pansy loved Y/n to death and always wished for her to find happiness and love- and Draco was that. Small love triangle with Cedric occurs. Trouble awakens when Professor Trelawney questions Y/n. She believes evil lies within her. Y/n had no idea what that mad professor was going on about. Y/n soon realizes the truth when the infamous Tom Riddle appears in her dreams and her journal. Draco x Fem!Reader This story doesn't follow the timeline, like the movies! I do not own any of the characters or plot, rightful ownership to J.K Rowling. I do however, own Y/n. All short chapters! (1,000-1,500+ word count) Started 2020 August 18 - 24 March 2021 𝙃𝙞𝙜𝙝𝙚𝙨𝙩 𝙍𝙖𝙣𝙠𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙨 : #1 𝘪𝘯 "𝘥𝘳𝘢𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘢𝘭𝘧𝘰𝘺𝘹𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘦𝘳" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 9/13/20 #1 𝘪𝘯 "𝘹𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘦𝘳" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 9/23/20 #1 𝘪𝘯 "𝘮𝘢𝘭𝘧𝘰𝘺𝘹𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘦𝘳" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 𝘰𝘯 9/24/20 #1 𝘪𝘯 "𝘵𝘰𝘮" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 𝘰𝘯 01/25/21 #1 𝘪𝘯 "𝘱𝘶𝘳𝘦𝘣𝘭𝘰𝘰𝘥" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 10/23/20 #1 𝘪𝘯 "𝘱𝘢𝘯𝘴𝘺𝘱𝘢𝘳𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘴𝘰𝘯" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 11/02/20 #1 𝘪𝘯 "𝘴𝘭𝘺𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘪𝘯" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 12/19/20 #1 𝘪𝘯 "wizardingworld" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 02/08/21 #1 𝘪𝘯 "potter" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 06/29/21 #3 𝘪𝘯 "𝘮𝘢𝘭𝘧𝘰𝘺" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 11/01/20 #15 𝘪𝘯 "draco" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 06/10/22Complete
I Swear This Time I Mean It ✔️
An 8th year Drarry fic where Harry barely speaks anymore, but Draco doesn't need words to understand him. After spending the summer together and beginning their relationship, it's time for Harry and Draco to transition back to Hogwarts. Both men know continuing their relationship isn't going to be easy, but nothing good ever is. Can they keep their relationship hidden from not only their friends, but the wizarding world as a whole until they're ready to come out? Can they, along with their friends, end house prejudices for good, and finally unite Hogwarts? Sequel to my story Ghosts, but my goal is that this can be read as a stand alone book. You'll just miss Harry and Draco becoming friends, as well as the start of their relationship. The cover art was done by @/sashaelfel on instagram. I don't own the rights to Harry Potter or any aspects of the movies/stories, however I do own the rights to all ideas that I have come up with. My work is my own, please do not post it anywhere else. Started: August 9th, 2021 Completed: August 7th, 2022 100K - July 30th, 2022Complete
fictober 2020
this is a compilation of me trying to write something every one or two days for a month. a lot of things in here will be unedited and most of it will most likely be inspired by things i've watched/read or just straight up fanfiction. i'm really just doing this to experiment and try to find my sort of uhh style?? also it's to make me write more cuz i don't publish anything anymore much less finish writing things. fandoms in this collection 🎨the goldfinch - donna tartt 🍁over the garden wall - cartoon network 🎈it - stephen king (movie logic atm cuz I haven't read the book) 🖋dead poets society (1989) ships in this collection 🎨boreo (Boris/Theo) 🎈stenbrough (Stan/Bill) 🖋anderperry (Todd/Neil) (it's basically only goldfinch/boreo stuff help me) any feedback and criticism is much appreciated because this challenge is mainly about me trying to improve my writing. - - - word count - 10,198 - - - no characters are mine unless stated otherwise. all edits on photos done by me, original photos aren't mine unless stated otherwise.Complete
Entrapment | Draco Malfoy
Draco Malfoy love story. Friendship, smut, love, hate, trauma, broken hearts. MATURE CONTENT! 15+ ~ "You make me feel like I'm stuck, Emelia! Like I'm never going to be able to live my life how I want to. You make me feel like I'm stuck with you and only you!" Draco yelled at me fiercely as tears welled up in my hazel eyes. "You don't mean that." I whispered, my stomach churning from the words he spat at me. "Like hell I don't." ~ Highest rankings🥰: #1 in DracoFanfic #1 in WizardingWorld #1 in HermioneGranger #1 in Hogwarts #2 in Hufflepuff #2 in Dracolovestory #3 in DeathlyHallows #3 in writing This book is complete/ in process of editing. Some characters belong to J.K. Rowling as well as some plot points.Complete
Ghosts ✔️
A postwar fic where Harry barely speaks anymore, and no one understands him the way Draco Malfoy does. One apologetic letter written by Draco will change the course of both of their lives. Mentions themes such as PTSD, trauma, and depression. Read with caution, but this will be a lighthearted fic for the most part. Mentions of modern day elements you've been warned! Cover made by @Dragonfirehyun ! I don't own the rights to Harry Potter or any aspects of the movies/stories, however I do own the rights to all ideas that I have come up with. Highest ranking: #1 Drarry - 6/9/21 #1 Drarryfanfic - 6/15/21 #1 Dracoxharry - 6/15/21 #1 Harry - 8/22/21 Started: May 17th, 2021 Completed: July 24th, 2021 Milestones: 200K - October 11th, 2021 300K - January 14th, 2022 400K - April 24th, 2022 500K - July 24th, 2022 600K - October 21st, 2022 700K - February 14th, 2023 800K - May 30, 2023Complete
MistClan's path super edition: Miststar's story (REVISED IN VER. 2)
UPDATE: NOVEMBER 2020: VERSION 2 OUT NOW. IT'S WAY BETTER. TRUST ME! MARCH 2019- I will be rewriting this book soon! There are some things that could use MAJOR changing... -_-;;; Just keep watch for the (REVISED... AGAIN) tag beside every chapter. Look below, even this description could use some major work. I'll work on it eventually. Until then, PLEASE read my original works instead, Petrified and Imagine. They will surely be more interesting than this book I wrote back in 5th grade, about 8 years ago... Cover by Amythic LOOK TO THE MIST TO FIND YOUR DESTINY... One day in MistClan a kit named Mistkit was born. She had always wanted to be leader since the day she began to see the world, and her siblings, Sedgekit and Ivykit, don't think she can be leader. Now she has to try to prove them wrong. Join Mistkit as she grows up in her adventures as a loyal MistClan warrior, and how she rose to the top to gain her victory as Miststar, leader of MistClan. This is a fan fiction book related to the series "Warriors" by Erin Hunter. Rated PG for the following: Sad bits Deaths Fighting Kit births (I cannot go into too much detail of that. That would be awfully disgusting.) People at least 8+ should read this. ^^ Unless you're a scared little kittypet who thinks they cannot handle it. Lol, JK. XD This book comes before in chronology: MistClan's path book 1: Into the clans ~MOST READ BOOK OF MINE!~Complete
gone. (draco malfoy)
"𝙰𝚗𝚍 𝚓𝚞𝚜𝚝 𝚕𝚒𝚔𝚎 𝚝𝚑𝚊𝚝, 𝚜𝚑𝚎 𝚠𝚊𝚜 𝗴𝗼𝗻𝗲." Y/n Whitmoore, daughter of well known purebloods, is entering her sixth year at Hogwarts after just transferring from Beauxbatons Academy. There she meets the spoiled Slytherin prince who claims he wants nothing to do with her, but does everything he can to protect her. Little do they know of the dangers and betrayals that lie ahead of them... *contains mature content/language... ••••• based on the "𝗼𝗯𝗹𝗶𝘃𝗶𝗮𝘁𝗲" pov series on my tik tok @.𝗱𝗿𝗮𝗰𝗼𝘀𝗺𝗮𝗶𝗻𝗵𝗼𝗲 !! ✨🖤 ••••• [𝗱𝗿𝗮𝗰𝗼 𝘅 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱𝗲𝗿] ••• 𝘩𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘦𝘴𝘵 𝘢𝘤𝘩𝘪𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘴: #1 - fanfiction #1 - romance #1 - diggory #1 - pov #1 - drama #2 - slytherin #6 - dracomalfoy #9 - hogwarts #12 - dracofanfic #5 - malfoy #1 - dare #1 - dracotok #2 - obliviate ••• 𝚜𝚝𝚊𝚛𝚝𝚎𝚍: october 24, 2020 𝚏𝚒𝚗𝚒𝚜𝚑𝚎𝚍: 𝖽𝖾𝖼𝖾𝗆𝖻𝖾𝗋 24, 2020Complete
𝙙𝙚𝙖𝙙 𝙧𝙤𝙨𝙚𝙨 (𝖽𝗋𝖺𝖼𝗈 𝗆𝖺𝗅𝖿𝗈𝗒 𝗑 𝗋𝖾𝖺𝖽𝖾𝗋)
Your years at Hogwarts were always simple, despite the chaos caused by Harry Potter and Voldemort. As a Hufflepuff, you found it easy to avoid that drama. Despite that, drama seems to find you, as Draco Malfoy and the Dark Lord both seem to take very different interests in you. ~~~ I felt something coarse and dry fall onto my arm and I looked over to see a withered leaf, its shade a dark grey-green. The bouquet of roses was completely wilted, practically falling apart in my hand. Had I done that? Just a minute ago they were bright and colourful. Now . . . they're just dead. ~~~ » completed september 28th 2019 » highest rank - #1 in fandoms as of april 2021, may 2021, august 2022 » lowercase intentional » check out my other draco x reader, fools !Complete
Don't Ever Forget
(A Draco Malfoy x she/her Reader fanfiction) Your time as a Hufflepuff at Hogwarts and the Second Wizarding War is a few years behind you as you start your position at the Department of Magical Accidents and Catastrophes at the Ministry of Magic. Alongside friends, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, and Ron Weasley, you dream of fixing the corrupt Ministry of Magic and making both the Wizarding World and Muggle World a safe place. On your first day at the Ministry, you come across someone who you had only spoken to once at Hogwarts. Draco Malfoy. Both terrified and intrigued by the circulating opinions of him, memories of his past at Hogwarts, and his current mysterious demeanor, you decide to get to know who Draco really is. While trying to get closer to Draco, you are also discovering darkness within the Ministry. Ideas of pure-blood supremacy remain even after the death of Voldemort and the danger of a new dark wizard arises. #1 dracoxreader (11/25/2020) #6 malfoy (9/18/2021) #3 malfoyxreader (10/25/2021) #4 hufflepuff (9/22/2021) #3 draco (10/4/2021)Complete
Talking About My 2020s Life and Covid-19
Behold! A fusion of fiction and reality where I talk about my life beginning from January 2020, Covid-19, and more featuring a variety of guests like Mickey Mouse, Goku, Kirito, Asuna, Nagato, Tsunade, Naruto, Sonic, Llenn, Konan, Pitohui and Ryuk! But that's not all! There's summaries at the end of nearly every section as well as The Mother Of All Summaries, pop culture references here and there, roller coaster talk, heaps of music links, and more! I'm not going to sugar coat it though. Things get seriously real when it comes to the Covid stuff of all as a few other things. This is my most important writing ever. Covid is scary. People don't want to talk about it anymore. This is a really loooooong writing. But please if you set aside some time to read at least the minimum you should read: the intro, outro, and Mother Of All Summaries. Various other topics mentioned or covered: anime, various video games, "AI" art, my non binary identity, swords, varying thoughts I've had, furry conventions, writing, drawing art, my Minecraft theme park, 2 of the people who have passed this decade in my family, and more. Note: 60,000 words of this writing or so are cited sections of text from various articles. Copyright related info: do not post this writing somewhere else and claim it as your own. You may share it as much as you want though.Complete
Y/n L/n was a quiet girl, she liked to keep her circle small. She came from a wealthy family. Her parents were both Slytherin, so naturally she was sorted into Slytherin as well. That's when she befriended Pansy Parkinson and Daphne Greengrass. Pansy and Y/n had always been closer to each other. Both being the only child, they became like sisters. When Pansy finds out one of her other friends has feelings for Y/n, she takes it upon herself to make them a couple. Pansy loved Y/n to death and always wished for her to find happiness and love- and Draco was that. Small love triangle with Cedric occurs. Trouble awakens when Professor Trelawney questions Y/n. She believes evil lies within her. Y/n had no idea what that mad professor was going on about. Y/n soon realizes the truth when the infamous Tom Riddle appears in her dreams and her journal. Draco x Fem!Reader This story doesn't follow the timeline, like the movies! I do not own any of the characters or plot, rightful ownership to J.K Rowling. I do however, own Y/n. All short chapters! (1,000-1,500+ word count) Started 2020 August 18 - 24 March 2021 𝙃𝙞𝙜𝙝𝙚𝙨𝙩 𝙍𝙖𝙣𝙠𝙞𝙣𝙜𝙨 : #1 𝘪𝘯 "𝘥𝘳𝘢𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘢𝘭𝘧𝘰𝘺𝘹𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘦𝘳" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 9/13/20 #1 𝘪𝘯 "𝘹𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘦𝘳" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 9/23/20 #1 𝘪𝘯 "𝘮𝘢𝘭𝘧𝘰𝘺𝘹𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘦𝘳" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 𝘰𝘯 9/24/20 #1 𝘪𝘯 "𝘵𝘰𝘮" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 𝘰𝘯 01/25/21 #1 𝘪𝘯 "𝘱𝘶𝘳𝘦𝘣𝘭𝘰𝘰𝘥" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 10/23/20 #1 𝘪𝘯 "𝘱𝘢𝘯𝘴𝘺𝘱𝘢𝘳𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘴𝘰𝘯" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 11/02/20 #1 𝘪𝘯 "𝘴𝘭𝘺𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘪𝘯" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 12/19/20 #1 𝘪𝘯 "wizardingworld" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 02/08/21 #1 𝘪𝘯 "potter" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 06/29/21 #3 𝘪𝘯 "𝘮𝘢𝘭𝘧𝘰𝘺" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 11/01/20 #15 𝘪𝘯 "draco" 𝘵𝘢𝘨 06/10/22
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