Fanfiction: Analysis and Review
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Emily Potter is Harry Potter's twin sister. They have always been together in everything. Until their letter came in the mail. They got to Hagwarts and all good but they got separated. Harry got sorted into Gryffindor but... Emily got sorted into Slytherin. She became friends with her brother's worst enemy, Draco Malfoy. As soon she sees this boy she felt something. She just ignored her feelings because she didn't want to ruin the friendship. But what if the feelings are too strong? ⚠️ SOME BAD LANGUAGE This might also have some Gen Z humor. I can't resist sorry, I have to⚠️ ●○●○●○●○●○●○●○●○●○●○ "No, Malfoy. You have hurt me so much. It's like you only thinking about yourself. Because if you actually cared you would have at least let me know!" I raised my voice. "Don't you ever, you fucking listening, ever say I'm only caring about myself because all I do it's for the safety of the people I love. Including you!"He said stressed out and grabbed my face with both of his hands and we were so close apart. I don't answer him and just stare at his eyes, lips, nose, every detail on his face. The tension was so high that we couldn't hold it anymore. We started kissing uncontrollably. I missed being this close to him. And I knew he did too. ●○●○●○●○●○●○●○●○●○●○ Started: December 15, 2020 Finished: April 27, 2023
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