The Cammander's Girl
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Last published Thu, Aug 14, 2025
"I think I love you."
"You think you do?"
"I know you make my days brighter- despite the constant death I see."
A story in which Commander Steve McGarrett has to babysit a woman he has hated- read as loved- since his high-school years. Her parents are killed and her little brother is kidnapped one night- with her being shot and left for dead- and since Steve distrusts- read as misses and wants to protect- her so much, he says he will babysit her while the team finds the killer.
I'm shit at descriptions.
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