My Perfectionist System
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In a world where might is right, Alex Franz, a frail second son to a noble family wakes up in a different body. Haunted by the terrible story of the previous owner Alex becomes a wiser man who is a heir not only a business but a terrible disease that killed the previous lord of the house. But sometimes fate decides otherwise. A mysterious system called the Perfectionist System awakens within him, offering a single command: succeed in the impossible goal of attaining perfection, with the beginning of eradicating the disease which threatens his life.
As the young man gets a unique opportunity to atone for all the sins he has committed in his previous life and to become a nobleman, Alex will face the realities of the world of magic where physical might, quick-wittedness, and might decide everything. His journey is progressive and each time he accomplishes a quest he feels he is moving towards being the perfect man but the journey has risks that are visible and those that are hidden. Will Alex be able to overcome his weak flesh and become powerful or will the weight of the shepherd be too much for him?
With magic and schemes, heroes and villains, ambition and perseverance, get ready for the breathtaking world of magic that will turn into deadly traps at any moment.
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