The elements but revised af
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Last published Tue, Aug 12, 2025
Fuck so I wrote this story when I was younger called the elements and it freaking sucked and was basic as hell and made zero sense. This is my revised version I guess because I have much more idea than before. And now I know what I'm doing kinda.
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