Timmy Two Toes and Jimmy Stick

In a world where toes are used for currency, the main character Timmy "Two Toes" is down on his luck. His parents both were enslaved by the government for losing all their toes. And now his girlfriend cheated on him with a man with eleven toes, he wants revenge but has no power to change anything. He then meets a one-toed old man who changes everything...

(This is my first time writing anything, extremely welcome to receive constructive criticism no matter how harsh. Please tell me how you feel about this story and what you like and dislike. I am open to advice.)