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Ongoing, First published Sep 17, 2024
Mature
I've dreamed of her for as long as I can remember, a shadowy figure watching over me, slender and pale with eyes that shined like the midnight moon, as a child she would visit me in the silent hours of the night, her presence  soothing yet sinister. I never knew her name, but she felt real, more real than a dream should.

Now, years later, at 19 I've returned to my family's estate, and the dreams have only grown stronger. The same woman haunts my nights, and during the day, I can't shake the feeling that something is missing, something just out of reach.

Then she appears. The woman that's plagued my lonely nights. Her figure the same, her touch familiar, as if we've met before. As if I've known her for lifetimes, upon lifetimes,
𝒞𝒶𝓇𝓂𝒾𝓁𝓁𝒶


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"The Caregiver and the Mob Boss" ❦ Avelina makes her money by taking care of those who can't take care of themselves. When she is handed a case about a man who had needed a personal caregiver, she accepts. One thing Avelina never anticipated was the dangerous lifestyle he lived. Not only that, but she didn't expect for him to be so incredibly good-looking. Adrik Zolotov, the Russian mobster that everyone called "Mad Hatter". His insanity and crave for blood left him the most feared man of all. All he wanted was power and those around him to fear him. For a man recently diagnosed with Asperger's syndrome, everyone believed him to be emotionally incapable of ever loving anyone. . . Imagine their surprise when he meets Avelina. ❦ "Mr. Zolotov, I have to make sure you bathe before I leave. It's apart of my jobs protocol," she said softly. The truth was that he made her feel nervous. There was so much coldness and evil in his eyes, it left a chill to run down her spine. "Fine," he stated before walking over to his bathtub. Her eyes followed his movements as he pulled off his shirt causing her to lick her lips and quickly look away. She could hear the sound of more clothes falling onto the ground until the sound of water running littered her eardrums. "You assist when asked, isn't that right?" He asked. Slowly, she opened her eyes to see that he had already gotten into the shower. "Yes," Avelina answered. "Bathe me." ❦ Dangerously far from cliché