The Three of Us

The Three of Us

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A fantasy fiction story I wrote about three guys who get sucked into the world of their favorite video game and have to try and figure out how to escape. Ive never finished writing this but I wanted to share it to see if I should continue. If anyone would actually like to read it. It has its issues like dialogue can be confusing to understand so if you have any advice I want to hear it. It was my first story Ive written of this scale and its not perfect but its interesting. Hope you enjoy and do tell me if you like it or not, I'm experimenting right now so please be honest. Thank you and have a wonderful day/night!
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Hiya just edited this without removing: Basically, this has short scenes and random info and stuff for my OCs and random scenes for my book! Ok so, I want to write a book but making a plot sucks, yet I have characters and worldbuilding so I'm making this. Hope if anyone reads this that they like it? Please if you have any critiques do tell (but like tell me why it's bad not just that it is cause that isn't helpful, like give me why it is, and/or ideas for improvement(aka Constructive critism).

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