Truth's Potion Store
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Huling na-publish Fri, Sep 20, 2024
Are you ready to know the truth about your story? Are you ready to face the cauldron and see if your characters hold up? Or are you afraid a mighty potion might leak through the plot holes?
If you're brave and strong, and not afraid of destiny, come and enter the Truth's Potion Store. But be advised: you might get more than you're bargaining for.
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A critical reading service is when a person reads your book and checks more technical aspects of it: Are there any plot holes? Do the characters have depth? Is the tone consistent? Overall, a critical reader will go over what needs to be lapidated to better your story.
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