Truth's Potion Store
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Are you ready to know the truth about your story? Are you ready to face the cauldron and see if your characters hold up? Or are you afraid a mighty potion might leak through the plot holes?
If you're brave and strong, and not afraid of destiny, come and enter the Truth's Potion Store. But be advised: you might get more than you're bargaining for.
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A critical reading service is when a person reads your book and checks more technical aspects of it: Are there any plot holes? Do the characters have depth? Is the tone consistent? Overall, a critical reader will go over what needs to be lapidated to better your story.
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