A Mindless Sight. 1st draft
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Last published Wed, Jul 20, 2011
Important! Note to self!
Your name is Jace,. I don't know how much longer you have before you forget writing this, but I had to try. Trust me I'm you. Her name is Addy, she's sixteen, and you love her. Find her, protect her, and whatever you do don't kill her.
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