LOOKING FOR ENGLISH NATIVE SPEAKERS TO GIVE SHORT FEEDBACK ON MY WRITING

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Hello, this is just a super short excerpt from a story i've been writing for quite some time. Since i'm not an english native speaker, I would love some feedback on weather my writing makes sense to those of you who are. 
I'm not sure, if it makes sense for me to upload my story in english or if I should translate it to german, so please leave your opinion, on weather my english is good enough.
Have fun with this tiny snippet of my fantasy romance story!All Rights Reserved

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Noor, a dancer in the Royal Court of the Al-Yauzhan Empire wants nothing more than to pay off her debts and lead a nice, simple life-but a chance encounter with the crown prince and his brother brings her into the dangerous world of court politics. As Noor and the princes investigate their uncle and cousin's possible treason, she grows closer to the crown prince, but in order to save the kingdom and the person she loves, Noor will have to risk everything... A romantic adventure set in an imagined Arabic kingdom, THE DANCING GIRL is a story of court intrigues, romantic entanglements, and secret meetings as Noor and her best friend Amir try to help the princes they're falling for expose corrupt court officials with plans to seize the throne. Noor and Amir are close to having everything they've ever dreamed of...now all they need to do is survive.

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