The swimming pool affair

This is my first attempt at writing, and I have to admit, math always had my heart more than English ever did. But here I am, diving into the world of words. The story unfolds around a plus-size girl, whose vibrant personality shines brightly despite the insecurities she faces. She finds herself captivated by the charming receptionist at the local swimming pool, a place where the sun glistens off the water and laughter echoes in the air. As she navigates her feelings, the enchanting atmosphere of the pool becomes the backdrop for her evolving romance.

Any feedback is greatly appreciated.