Blood and Redemption_Demo 1
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This is a simple story that will serve as a demo or a prelude to the main story that I'm yet to publish.
It will consist of 8 chapters
Chapter 1 : Lost son
Chapter 2 : Just an old man
Chapter 3 : Father's sins
Chapter 4 : Ghosts of the Mountain
Chapter 5 : On my word
Chapter 6 : Fire in a storm
Chapter 7 : Beyond a battle's end
Chapter 8 : The weight of honour
Chapter 9 : Redemption at last
This is not the main story but a demo.
This story is more likely to have spoilers for the main series, though they may not seem to follow the same sequence.
Delore is a battle-worn mercenary, haunted by a past filled with betrayal and bloodshed. His reputation as a cold, relentless warrior precedes him, yet beneath the hardened exterior lies a soul heavy with regret. Unbeknownst to him, he crosses paths with a young man-his estranged son-during a mission tied to a dangerous conspiracy. Manipulated by enemies who weave lies and deceit, Delore's attempts at redemption lead him down a tragic path, where every decision pulls him deeper into a web of mistrust and loss. As the truth slowly unravels, Delore must face his greatest challenge: reconciling his broken past with the fate of his son, all while enemies close in, exploiting his weakness for their own gain. Later along the line, he sees the same events play all over again. Who knows what fate has installed for Delore, the strongest mercenary.
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