Alan
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This is a short version of a long story I'm writing. What happens when a boy loses his dad? The crash of the windshield echoed. A large tree fell on the front of his dad’s four-door blue car. Alan got out of his seat in search of his dad. The entire front of the car was occupied by a large tree. “Daddy.” His voice squeaked,”dad.” Sirens blared in the distance coming closer to the wreak. An ambulance and two police cars pulled up to the car. A woman got out of the police car and went over to the ambulance. She pulled a stretcher out of the back and brought it over to the car. Her brown hair was pulled into a tight bun on top of her head and a heart shaped locket hung from her neck. She pulled open the back door of the car and stuck out her hand for Alan to grab.
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I fisted the front of his hoodie and yanked him out the door, no doubt giving him the surprise of his life. Just as his feet hit the ground I slammed him back into the side of the car...hard. I didn't give it my all - I wanted to shake him up, not kill the fucker. His hands instinctively shielded his face, as I drew my arm back, fist clenched and ready to rearrange his face a little. He squirmed and tried his best to wriggle out of my hold. Just as I honed in on his face, being the target of my first punch, the hoodie feel back slightly and a wave of brown hair spilled out and large brown eyes met mine. It was a girl.

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