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The Rainbow Factory (not completed) Alternate!
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Ongoing, First published Apr 20, 2015
The Rainbow Factory is a gruesome tale of a Pegasus  named Scootalo who is doing her flying test, along with her close friend Orion. They later, encounter The Rainbow Factory, where the workers make rainbows out of other ponies! (Totally normal, right?) The original story is very unappetizing, along with many fanfics that fit in that category. So, I created an alternate version, with the same central idea as The Rainbow Factory. (Scootalo and Orion don't die.)

Now, this isn't thoroughly copying! 

Credits to the artist of the cover! I post 1 chapter at a time for books, and this is my first story for WattPad! (I may or may not suck entirely... ~•-•~)

For anyone who can handle a long story, some gore here and there, and a colorful vocabulary a few times. (As rare as possible) 

Enjoy!! c:
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