The perfect guy?life? or doll?
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Ongoing31m
Last published Thu, Aug 8, 2013
hi guys this is my first story...so sorry if I suck ok????
and if you have any ideas for me then I would be happy ^^
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This story Is about a girl named Lacie and that her parents never has time for her...then her friends talks about BJD which she got interested and so she got one and because of the towns old legends her BJD named Demitri turned into human...
so will her life be lonely??? I dont know let read if you want too ^^
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