Misclick! Now I'm an Villainess.. (WORKING ON)

Imagine being given a chance at life again.. Then jinxing it up in record time..

Welcome to my life-well actually after life.. as Mallory Azula.. my name LITERALLY means unlucky..

my life has been jinxed, i think.. I died at the ripe age of 18..on my 18th birthday (so happy birthday to me I guess?..) Well then imagine thinking you would just waltz up to heaven, only to see a pop up screen blocking your way of vision..

P.S this is my first story made, so my writing is not that good (imo), so feedback would be lovely! Ty!