The Entangled Sisters
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There was once a group of girls who had promised to stay sisters in a haunted town, with legacies that ran deep and tails of curses. Yet alas the horrid town eventually engulfed them, just as it had with many others. I started this book at 12 and I would like some feedback on it. I want to publish this book one day and if someone helps a tremendous amount I will give credit. This story is about a close group of friends who start hunting after a serial killer. I'm not sure if I want to tie in some fantasy and give these girls powers or no? Just be nice and enjoy this rough draft of a book I hope you will one day read as a hardcover!
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