You're the villain?
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Hiiiii this is my first time making a story and I only have a little bit of an idea of what I'm going too do as well how it's going to go
Constructive criticism and feedback is very much Welcomed 😊 please enjoy. The picture is a spider Lilly
Anna was the Hero everyone looked up too her except her mentor their was always room for improvement and well I guess the villain too they didn't like her either or do they?
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