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Ongoing, First published Oct 28, 2024
As Yuvraj Vatsaraja ventured deeper into the forest with his followers, a soft, melodic sound floated in the trees. It was enchanting and ethereal causing him to halt his horse and halt his horse and listen intently.

He motioned his followers to remain quiet. 
His heart racing with curosity. 

Senapati Simukh : " Yuvraj, we should not stop here".

But Vatsraja could not move ; he was drawn towards the source of the melody. 

As he crept forward, he pushed aside the thick foliage and emerged into a clearing. There, before him, was a breathtaking sight-a magnificent waterfall, the water cascading down the rocks with a thunderous roar, creating a crystal-clear pool below. 

And amidst this natural splendor, he saw her. 
Rajkumari Chandralobbe sat gracefully on a swing.She was surrounded by her maids and cousins, but Vatsaraja's eyes were fixated on her. Her long hair flowed freely, cascading down her back like a dark river, and her laughter mingled harmoniously with the song.

As she sang, "Achutam keshvam Ramnarayanam krishna Damodaram" Vatsaraja's heart, was captivated completely.

Yuvraja Vatsaraja: "Simukh, who could she be?"

Senapati Simukh: "Looks like a princess. "

Vatsaraja felt as if he had stepped into a dream. 

Suddenly, a pair of maids playfully pushed the princess into the water. She shrieked in surprise but quickly joined the laughter, splashing about in the pool as other girls followed suit. 
The other maids,  quickly encircled the water body with colorful opaque fabrics, creating a curtain for the princess's privacy. 


Guards: "You all must leave this place."

Yuvraj Vatsaraja and  quickly adopting the demeanor of humble commoners.


Rajkumar Vatsaraja: "We beg your pardon. Who is the princess?"


Guard: "It seems you are outsiders. She is Rajkumari Chandralobbe."



Rajkumar Vatsaraja: "She will become our  queen of Vajraashtra".
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The First and Forgotten Wife

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Two maids were cleaning a vast chamber when the younger maid asked the older one, "Didisa, you have been working in the palace for two decades right. Please tell me why are we cleaning this already clean chamber?". The older one smiled and said, "Although this chamber is always kept clean, it should be cleaned before anyone can reside here. And above all, our Ranisa is coming back to the palace". The younger maid didn't seem to accept it as a good news and said, "Whoever may come, but they cannot become equal to our choti Ranisa. She is the most kind, generous and sweetest person I have ever seen. She had never gotten angry on any maids even if they make mistakes. Take my example, I have made such a blunder on my first day here, but choti Ranisa accepted me as her own maid. Who can match her in kindness or even sword fight? And moreover she is Ranasa's heart beat". The old maid sighed and said, "Our Ranisa may not hold the heart of Ranasa. She may not be well versed in sword fight. But there is a reason why she is still our Ranisa. Sometimes one may have to be harsh to deliver justice and not just compromise between the victim and the tormentor. The people should have some fear about getting punished if they do wrong. And that charisma is with our Ranisa". ----------------------------------------------------------- A young girl of 17 years, looked at the retreating back of her newly married husband with a sad face. Just then her brother-in-law seated beside her husband's empty seat said, "Why are you sad, Bhabhisa?". She replied, "It's Nothing devarsa". He glanced back at his bhabhisa one more time and thought, "I don't know when bhaisa will open up with bhabhisa about his heart. She thinks that he is not fond of her. But how would one explain, why he ate the saltless food without a complaint and glared at me to keep my mouth shut. Unless it is for his beloved wife".