The Ripple (Rough story)
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Ongoing, First published Oct 29
Mature
This is the full rough story, I just want Constructive criticism about how I could be more descriptive and pace the story better bc I gave up on chapter 10 ngl, and there's probably a few plotholes here and there.
 I'll rewrite the story, one day, eventually, if I remember, I have commitment issues sometimes.
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(The story you are about to read was written over 2 years ago. Since I couldn't find an editor or anyone to even critique it, I am posting it unedited., unrefined, raw-if you will. I do need an editor/proofreader, but as of the moment, the position remains untaken. So pardon me for the typos, poor grammar, and other ugly things you might notice. I would appreciate comments and suggestions. If you are interested in helping me improve the story, please let me know. )