The Ripple (Rough story) - Arielle - Wattpad

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This is the full rough story, I just want Constructive criticism about how I could be more descriptive and pace the story better bc I gave up on chapter 10 ngl, and there's probably a few plotholes here and there.
     I'll rewrite the story, one day, eventually, if I remember, I have commitment issues sometimes.All Rights Reserved

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This is the full rough story, I just want Constructive criticism about how I could be more descriptive and pace the story better bc I gave up on chapter 10 ngl, and there's probably a few plotholes here and there.
     I'll rewrite the story, one day, eventually, if I remember, I have commitment issues sometimes.

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