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The Critic
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Ongoing, First published Apr 25, 2015
It's a book of critiques about other books, a perfect place to find recommendations as well. Yes, I will critique any kind of book, from the big name authors to those books that only have about 500 reads; it doesn't matter nor is it relevant in critiquing. Just a bit of a warning here, I will hammer them. So, if you people can't handle honesty, I suggest you just click on a  another book. You've been warned. And please, never be afraid to disagree in the comments and critique me. Just please have a valid argument. Like an arrowhead, you need a point.  A/N:  Don't mind the cover for now. I'm doing my best to shoot a good one.
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