Part of Me
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Sixteen-year-old Eleanor Sommers feels like her world is falling apart. Her mental health is unravelling, her parents are divorcing, and she is left with caring for her younger brother while still attending school. Feeling isolated and overwhelmed, she unexpectedly finds comfort in Kit, the school's charming rugby and football star and the son of her mother's best friend.
Behind his confident façade, Kit is battling a hidden eating disorder, and as their lives intertwine he and Eleanor discover an unexpected connection. Together they confront their struggles, offering each other hope and strength. Set in modern England, this storey explores the weight of responsibility, the bond of friendship, the resilience of love, and the courage it takes to heal.
Highest Rankings
#1 in Journal
#41 in Sad Romance
#55 Comedy-Drama
#58 in Assault
#83 in ED
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This storey will reference mental health, sh, sa, ed's, smoking, alcohol consumption, and substance abuse. It will also mention an inappropriate romantic and sexual relationship between a student and teacher. Also a bit of blackmail
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