What I think JKR did wrong in HP
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This has spoilers for both HP and PJO (before You question why PJO I use it as a reference)
Ok this is entirely my opinion so please don't hate I don't expect anyone to agree with me on anything so yea I just think my dad is a bit annoyed by the fact I tell him every little detail that annoys me and that I like or what should have been different.
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