
When our English adviser tasked us to right a story, we were excite. As writers in the school publication, writing is very natural for us. However, this story took me about a week to construct and about 5 hours to be approved by my friends. We really put our efforts in this story. We were able to pass it in a summarized version than its supposed to (because we know that our judge don't want long stories) We were lucky to be a part of the top 3. Sir gab- our 'judge' for that particular project, told us our story is too 'clichè'. So today, I find my self re writing the story. This is how its supposed to be. NOT THE SUMMARIZED ONE WE PASSED. Along with Haniefah ad Pat. We hope you enjoy.Todos los derechos reservados
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