When You're Gone
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When our English adviser tasked us to right a story, we were excite. As writers in the school publication, writing is very natural for us. However, this story took me about a week to construct and about 5 hours to be approved by my friends.
We really put our efforts in this story. We were able to pass it in a summarized version than its supposed to (because we know that our judge don't want long stories) We were lucky to be a part of the top 3. Sir gab- our 'judge' for that particular project, told us our story is too 'clichè'.
So today, I find my self re writing the story. This is how its supposed to be. NOT THE SUMMARIZED ONE WE PASSED.
Along with Haniefah ad Pat.
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