The Betrayal
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  • Reads 232
  • Votes 19
  • Parts 12
  • Time 2h 10m
Ongoing, First published Apr 26, 2015
The Betrayal  

Freak weather and flash floods all over southern England. Half of Lafferton is afloat. A landslip on the Moor has closed the bypass and, as the rain slowly drains away, a shallow grave - and a skeleton - are exposed. The remains are identified as those of missing teenager, Harriet Lowther, last seen 16 years ago.
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