Turbulence
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Complete Sun, May 3, 2015
My first short story made ^_^
I know it's kinda boring and has a lot of holes but hope you enjoy it.
This story is about a father who forgot to pay attention and give time to his family and wife because of his work and the consequence of what he has done was heavy.
As you read this piece I hope that you will pick something up from the story and hope you learn some life lessons :D :) ^^
I accept harsh and negative comments as long as not to the point na bashing na ang nangyayare hihihihi and also for me to actually improve my works. That's all enjoy guys ;)
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