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Coming Back
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Ongoing, First published Jan 18, 2013
Trying to start my first novel, but it's in many bits in pieces, but basically it's starts out with This boy coming back to a girl, after they've been apart for almost a year, and as they interact eachother in this awkward situation of him randomly knocking on her door, it cuts back to memories of the days they were together, in the past. So it keeps going from the present moment of them reuniting, to important events in their past. The "Big Fight" part is one of the past-scenes I just haven't integrated it into the coming back part. I hope I don't confuse too much d: It's very much a work in progress
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