Jasper Bennett

Jasper is character from my original triology novel. I'm still working on it, so here WON'T be original story. I'm just killing my boredom, but i still expect comments about the story so I can know how this is going to work when real novel is out. Pls be honest and tell me what you think, but it's okay if you don't. Have a nice day :)
TW, BLOOD, SH