Polaris
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Ok so hello. This is my first ever passion project piece. I began writing it around 6 years ago and have been constantly adjusting it with time and experience. I have a solid plan of where I would like this story to go but conveying it in written context has proven much harder than initially assumed. I would love constructive criticism and feedback from you readers as I know you all have either read or written enough fanfics/stories to differentiate what is considered "peak" and what is garbage (please go easy on me). I thought of posting on Wattpad so that I could get more...unbiased? opinions on my W.I.P as I believe most of my friends wouldn't want to REALLY hurt my feelings lol. So thank you for taking the time out of your day/night to give this a go. I will update the story when I get the creative inspiration to do so :) -P (The cover image was made by Ashley Chow for Unsplash. It is only a temporary cover photo until I design my own.)
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I am republishing this for a friend who wanted to read a sample of my work. The plot is all over the place, but I know I'll revisit it in future. I initially wrote this in 2017 before I knew a lot of things I know now. There's a lot in here that is culturally insensitive. I have done my best to edit out what I could find at first glance, but if you see something glaringly offensive please make a comment about it so that I can correct my errors. The most egregious example that comes to mind is using the G-word for the Romani and relying on unflattering stereotypes. I plan to correct a lot of this in proceeding drafts. Other than that, enjoy my emotional, nonsensical ride! Trigger warnings for: body dysmorphia, body horror, medical trauma, sexual assault

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