Polaris (Working Title) Chapter 1

Ok so hello. This is my first ever passion project piece. I began writing it around 6 years ago and have been constantly adjusting it with time and experience. I have a solid plan of where I would like this story to go but conveying it in written context has proven much harder than initially assumed. I would love constructive criticism and feedback from you readers as I know you all have either read or written enough fanfics/stories to differentiate what is considered "peak" and what is garbage (please go easy on me). I thought of posting on Wattpad so that I could get more...unbiased? opinions on my W.I.P as I believe most of my friends wouldn't want to REALLY hurt my feelings lol. So thank you for taking the time out of your day/night to give this a go. I will update the story when I get the creative inspiration to do so :) -P

(The story image was made using Bing Image Creator. Yes it is A.I.)