A Thought of Heart

I am writing this as a view into my past for the girl I love. Although, the more I write the more I seem to invest in this story. So I am putting this story up as a way of expressing myself. Everything in this story is a representation of something in my past.

This is a short story about emotion. I give emotions their own characters, names, feeling, and stories. These emotions all fight for control of the world the live in, and what they believe to be right.
Also, this story tells of what happens when the outside world attacks these emotions peaceful and innocent world. Of how bad emotions can be chained, or grow strong.
Most of all: this is a story of brothers, and of right and wrong; of choosing between light and dark, and the consequences of those choices.

I do hope you all give me advice, for you are much better writers than me, and my last reason for writing this is to become a better writer.

Thank you all!