The Undoing
thehorridwriter
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  • Parts 9
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  • Reads 34
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  • Parts 9
  • Time 35m
thehorridwriter
Ongoing, First published Apr 27, 2015
'“You go ahead, I’ll be up in a few minutes. I have to take this.” He tossed me the keys and I 

hesitantly caught them before going ahead. I got maybe halfway to the elevator before I heard the 

sickening sound of skin breaking and bones crunching. I turned around only to see the guys from the 

auction house, stabbing Monty through the chest with a stake."

                            This is not the best or very long but i wanted to see what people thought and maybe get feedback to improve it. Please be kind but constructive criticism is welcome.
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