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The Undoing
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In corso, pubblicata il apr 27, 2015
Per adulti
'“You go ahead, I’ll be up in a few minutes. I have to take this.” He tossed me the keys and I 

hesitantly caught them before going ahead. I got maybe halfway to the elevator before I heard the 

sickening sound of skin breaking and bones crunching. I turned around only to see the guys from the 

auction house, stabbing Monty through the chest with a stake."

                            This is not the best or very long but i wanted to see what people thought and maybe get feedback to improve it. Please be kind but constructive criticism is welcome.
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This was wrong. I shouldn't be doing this. Why did I let them talk me into something like this? Usually people who rob banks go to jail- oh god I'm going to jail. My eyes wandered over all the workers and other people currently on the ground. I then stared down at the gun in my hands; the one Mace had all but thrown at me. My chest started to hurt as I stared at all of the scared and innocent people... this is the worst time for my asthma to act up. Carefully putting the gun down, I dug in my pockets for my inhaler. Once I finally found it I noticed a pair of bright green eyes staring at me. "Cat Eyes!" Mace screamed at me, before he grabbed my arm. "My inhaler!" I yelled, about to turn away when he yanked my arm. "Leave it!" He growled as we ran out of the bank. The other guys were running ahead of us, as sirens were heard from the distance. Once we were all inside, I tore my mask off as the others laughed and cheered. I guess this is what my life has become, failure.