The Undoing
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Last published Mon, Apr 27, 2015
'“You go ahead, I’ll be up in a few minutes. I have to take this.” He tossed me the keys and I
hesitantly caught them before going ahead. I got maybe halfway to the elevator before I heard the
sickening sound of skin breaking and bones crunching. I turned around only to see the guys from the
auction house, stabbing Monty through the chest with a stake."
This is not the best or very long but i wanted to see what people thought and maybe get feedback to improve it. Please be kind but constructive criticism is welcome.
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