Land beyond the clouds. A paradise of Sky spirits told of in heathen myths. Lucas has never doubted its existence, but neither did he even think of actually finding it until meeting Kress - a boy close to his own age who also carries one of the pendants said to be the keys to this mysterious place. Accompanied by Mrei, a princess desperate to find a cure for her sick father, the children set out on the journey to change everything. THIS IS A NANOWRIMO NOVEL. It most likely still needs a major rewrite. So...nitpick away! Every suggestion (even "this scene sucks") is welcome. ...Well, with the exception that I will not change it into third limited POV. I write in close third omniscient.
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