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Complete, First published Apr 28, 2015
This is a free-verse poem I just recently finished; it is based on true events in my life, and it's definitely one of the most personal poems I have ever written. I would definitely love some feedback on it, if you liked it, and if I should continue writing/posting poetry like this?

Any constructive feedback would be greatly appreciated! <3

~AcousticAngel2814
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Im 15 and a virgin just so y'all know and if you do end up messaging me text Arctic monkeys for confirmation because I don't know who y'all are and before you text any of my socials comment on the post so I know you're coming or even on my message board