The Dead Man Gawking (ON HOLD)

The Dead Man Gawking (ON HOLD)

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Having to have died ages ago without the ability to pass on to the other side was tough. But sitting through the ages knowing the other side of the war had won made it all the worst! What better outlet was there than scaring the daylights out of the living who dared claim your home as theirs? The soul of a Confederate fighter finds the familiar routine has begun: the modern wench setting the sign in front of his home, a family finding the house adorable, that same family moving their unflattering furniture about like they owned the place! But that always leads to the most entertaining part of being a ghost: the haunting. But this family of three carries a small surprise he doesn't expect. For the first time, somebody who was alive SEES him! The boy no older than six, and the soldier and his ghostly acquaintances have no idea how to handle this new experience: does the man allow the boy's family to stay and appease their timely curiosity? Or do they treat them like any other who has entered his home and make sure their afterlives stay uninterrupted?
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[COMPLETED] In the year 1921, a family was brutally murdered in a small cottage. The place could fit a small family and had a large garden, it was isolated and quiet, a perfect place to get away with murder and that's exactly what happened. The Avery family was killed. A mother and her son. They were both too young to die, the mother only being 34 and the son only being 16. No one understood why anyone would want to kill the little family, who's been through hell and back after the father walked out on them. He took all the money forcing them to move into the tiny home. Even then, they were still positive about things until... The terrifying day took place. No one has ever moved into the house since then, considering all the rumors going around about the son haunting the cottage. His first sighting being a few months after the murder and since then there's been many reports of his shadowy figure in the windows. Teenagers often explored the place but as soon as they were out of the house, they never went back inside. - Zach Herron, aged 17, now ready to move into a house of his own. After being under his parents watchful eye for years, he's ready to finally walk on his own two feet. He could've moved out at 16, legal age in England, but decided against it but now he was prepared. The cottage seemed like a fitting place for him to stay, he's seen the reviews about it being 'haunted' but paid no mind to it. [This story was written and finished a long time ago, meaning it's completely awful and I highly regret writing it now. I won't stop you from reading if you so desperately want to for whatever reason but please be mentally prepared to cringe multiple times.]

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