Naruto: Jiraiya's Death Rewrote

I've thought this through, I really didn't want to rewrite an already way too awesome part in the manga/anime Naruto. Jiraiya's death was possibly the most saddest of all death's in the show.
In order of Depressing Deaths
#1 Jiraiya
#2 Minato & Kushina
#3 Asuma
#4 Hiruzen
That said, I decided to keep the most basic parts the same... & just added in some parts I thought would be good to work in plus a snippet of the scene that Jiraiya told Naruto how much everyone admired how hard he works and how no one understands how he can keep going and going. This is part of the scene where Naruto is trying to be in sync with Gamatatsu thru Gamakichi's help & Jiraiya's advice.
I hope I do a good enough job...

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Disclaimer: I do not own or claim to own Naruto/Naruto Shippuden.

Thanks to Kishimoto for such a wonderful story! It has taught much & omg the FEELS!!