The promise *On Hold *
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  • Reads 359
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  • Parts 10
  • Time 1h 14m
Ongoing, First published Apr 28, 2015
Mature
after the death of her father Dorinda Charmain has to face the difficulties of life, try to help her mom and her baby brother. 
does luck come her way as she catches the eyes of the school bad boy. will unfulfilled promises be fulfilled does things get easy or hard and can a girl who doesn't expect much from life give her self a chance at love.
life isn't exactly easy for everyone, and losing the ones you love can be tough but its the ones that give you strength, hope that everything will be ok, they are the ones that promise you happiness and joy, they are the ones that matter the most
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"zack get out of my room" i yelled as the jerk walked in without knocking, it annoying enough that i have to see his stupid face every morning but now his barging into my room.
"ohh you just finished bathing, its ok dress up just act like am not here" he said while sitting on my bed and resting his head on the headboard,  he is so lucky that am half naked and only have a towel around me if not i would have walked up to that bed and thought him lesson.
i glared at him before saying "get out now!!!!!" he looked so calm it was driving me crazy, i balled my hand into a fist ready to punch him straight in his handsome face.
" your no fun 'he said before walking towards the door, he was just about to walk out when he turned around and winked, oh goody it happening again my heart was beating hard against my chest i hated this feeling, you think i wanted to kill him two minutes ago now i just want to kill him then hide his body in my walk-in closet so mrs smith doesn't find out.
i picked the tissue that was on my make up table and threw it at his face, he just smirked and said " i will see you later princess ", and finally i was left in peace God i hate him.
" i will kill you later " i mumbled to myself before walking into the closet to change.
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"How dare you!!" His stare and cold voice made me step back with fear scared of what he will do "You clumsy woman!! Keep those disgusting hands of yours steady or go die somewhere!! How dare you hurt her!! Do you even know who she is!!" "Alessandro..stop..it's alright.." Andrea pleaded from behind but he continued "Lowlives like you don't even deserve to step into a place like this bit we were generous to offer you this job....but You being an ungrateful brat couldn't do one thing right.......Hell you can't even walk properly how come you were hired for this job!!" Endless tears were flowing down my cheeks as he continued to reprimand me "Alessandro..please...stop" "No Andrea I will not stop..can't you see what she did.....You are too innocent and generous... you don't know girls like her.....they envy you and when they can't compete against you they engage in these dirty tactics .....bloody disgusting people...." I looked up into his eyes ....my eyes asking him if this is what he thought of me... I was never this low... How could he even think I did this deliberately! "Oh my god...your hand..." Andrea said looking at my hand I looked down to see my entire hand turned red with blisters everywhere. I felt numb earlier but now as I saw my wound I started feeling the suppressed pain I was controlling. My tears betrayed me not just because of his words but also from the pain of my burn. Andrea rushed towards me with a worried look on her face "Maria..bring ..the coolant hurry..we need to call the doctor.." She was something else So pure and caring My eyes lifted to see Ando He had a expression I couldn't decipher His eyes were fixed on my burn but I couldn't tell if he was worried or not. But soon that expression was gone as he turned around and left. I looked at his retreating back wondering since when did he become so heartless. Everything is fair in love and war And this my friends is a war of broken hearts. Also on Amazon #19 romance 12/9/2020