The promise *On Hold *
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Last published Mon, Sep 14, 2015
after the death of her father Dorinda Charmain has to face the difficulties of life, try to help her mom and her baby brother.
does luck come her way as she catches the eyes of the school bad boy. will unfulfilled promises be fulfilled does things get easy or hard and can a girl who doesn't expect much from life give her self a chance at love.
life isn't exactly easy for everyone, and losing the ones you love can be tough but its the ones that give you strength, hope that everything will be ok, they are the ones that promise you happiness and joy, they are the ones that matter the most
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"zack get out of my room" i yelled as the jerk walked in without knocking, it annoying enough that i have to see his stupid face every morning but now his barging into my room.
"ohh you just finished bathing, its ok dress up just act like am not here" he said while sitting on my bed and resting his head on the headboard, he is so lucky that am half naked and only have a towel around me if not i would have walked up to that bed and thought him lesson.
i glared at him before saying "get out now!!!!!" he looked so calm it was driving me crazy, i balled my hand into a fist ready to punch him straight in his handsome face.
" your no fun 'he said before walking towards the door, he was just about to walk out when he turned around and winked, oh goody it happening again my heart was beating hard against my chest i hated this feeling, you think i wanted to kill him two minutes ago now i just want to kill him then hide his body in my walk-in closet so mrs smith doesn't find out.
i picked the tissue that was on my make up table and threw it at his face, he just smirked and said " i will see you later princess ", and finally i was left in peace God i hate him.
" i will kill you later " i mumbled to myself before walking into the closet to change.
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"M-Michael?" I stuttered He smirked then chuckled at me. "You didn't think I would find you? Did you?" He smirked. "I-I..." I was shocked. How did he find me? His smirk turned to a serious and intimidating one. He started walking towards me in long strides. I turned around and started running, but didn't get very far when I felt hands wrap around my waist. "Let me go!" He chuckled and whispered in my ear, "I'll never let you go again princess." I felt tears sting my eyes and blur my vision. He picked me up and threw me over his shoulder. "No!" I cried and banged on his solid back. I saw that he was leading me towards his car. "No! Michael don't! Please don't!" He chuckled, "you won't be saying that for long baby girl." He put me down easily and caged me in. My back on the car door and his hands on the roof of the car. His warm minty breath fanned across my face. He brought his face down to my neck and started kissing. I squirmed to get out, but he brought his hands down to my hips to hold me in place. He brought his head up to look me in the eyes and brought both his hands up to my face. "I love you baby girl." He opened the back door, where the windows are tinted. "Get in." He said I looked to the door then him and shook my head. He narrowed his eyes at me and they instantly turned darker. He grabbed my arm roughly and threw me in. I landed on my stomach and I looked back to see Michael coming in a bit. I turned to look at the door in front of me and I moved up and tried to open it. I tugged and tugged and then I heard chuckling behind me. "Aren't child safety locks great baby girl?" He smirked at me. I felt tears run down my cheeks. He pulled my arm so I was close to him again. He wiped away my tears with his thumb. "Don't cry baby, please, you know it breaks my heart to see you hurt." "Then l-let me go.
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