The promise *On Hold *
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Last published Mon, Sep 14, 2015
after the death of her father Dorinda Charmain has to face the difficulties of life, try to help her mom and her baby brother.
does luck come her way as she catches the eyes of the school bad boy. will unfulfilled promises be fulfilled does things get easy or hard and can a girl who doesn't expect much from life give her self a chance at love.
life isn't exactly easy for everyone, and losing the ones you love can be tough but its the ones that give you strength, hope that everything will be ok, they are the ones that promise you happiness and joy, they are the ones that matter the most
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"zack get out of my room" i yelled as the jerk walked in without knocking, it annoying enough that i have to see his stupid face every morning but now his barging into my room.
"ohh you just finished bathing, its ok dress up just act like am not here" he said while sitting on my bed and resting his head on the headboard, he is so lucky that am half naked and only have a towel around me if not i would have walked up to that bed and thought him lesson.
i glared at him before saying "get out now!!!!!" he looked so calm it was driving me crazy, i balled my hand into a fist ready to punch him straight in his handsome face.
" your no fun 'he said before walking towards the door, he was just about to walk out when he turned around and winked, oh goody it happening again my heart was beating hard against my chest i hated this feeling, you think i wanted to kill him two minutes ago now i just want to kill him then hide his body in my walk-in closet so mrs smith doesn't find out.
i picked the tissue that was on my make up table and threw it at his face, he just smirked and said " i will see you later princess ", and finally i was left in peace God i hate him.
" i will kill you later " i mumbled to myself before walking into the closet to change.
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