Father, The Sinner
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  • Reads 12
  • Votes 1
  • Parts 3
  • Time 4h 53m
Ongoing, First published Nov 18, 2024
Mature
Captured following a battle, Mitchell, a soldier fighting for the nation of Klyduzku, is imprisoned in a rebel-controlled prison. He encounters a rebel guard, Emily, who assists him in escaping. Together, they escape to Mitchell's base of operations where it's discovered that Emily possesses knowledge of a rebel invasion planned on Klyduzku's capital, Remamilita. Per the request of the Head of Military, Emily and Mitchell embark on a 2500km journey across the Sahara Desert and Mediterranean Sea to Remamilitia to disclose the rebel invasion plan with the nation's leaders, Upper Echelon. Taking them through the frontline of a war that has been waging for over 15 years, where they confront more than the rebels and self-sabotaging Upper Echelon but also their insecurities and the secrets they closely guard.

[Draft/WIP] I'm posting this to gauge audience reaction. Any and all thoughts are extremely beneficial to improving the quality of the story I want to write.
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Elliot's partner was his whole world, but after Allan's death, his ghost haunts Elliot's dreams. Everyone tells Elliot to move on, but he isn't sure he can. ***** It's been a year since the love of Elliot's life, Allan, passed away. Everyone thinks he should have recovered after that much time, but Allan still haunts Elliot every night. He struggles to maintain relationships with his family, and despite a coworkers interest he can't summon up the courage to date. Elliot is living for the past, because to live for the present means he'll have to live with a hole in his heart. But the question Elliot has to face chases him through his monotonous days: is mourning Allan with everything he has truly living? [[word count: 40,000-50,000 words]]