Torn Pieces
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Last published Wed, Dec 18, 2024
This story picks up from where the serial Bharat Ka Veer Putra Maharana Pratap took its first leap from a younger cast to an older one. A lot of the fans didn't like how the storyline was handled, and I am one of those disgruntled fans. I find solace in rewriting plotlines for my favourite characters and here is one such story, born out of boredom.
Pratap and Ajabde, now tied by the sacred thread of marriage, are separated because of the evil plottings of a family member. Even when the truth is in front of them, reconciliation seems like an impossible task. This is a tale of their insecurities, challenges, and obstacles, both internal and external.
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