Celestial
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This is a poem I composed about the meeting of the sun and the moon and their coverstion during an eclispe.
You all know that according to Indian culture and Japanese mythology, when there is an eclipse happening people are not advised to look at them.
Did you ever wonder why?
It is said by legends that when the celestial couple (Moon and Sun) meet nobody is supposed to disturb or look at them.
This poem that I have composed narrates the coversation they have (It's an imagery). I would look forward to your opinions and reviews dear readers💜!
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