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Crescent Bookclub [CLOSED TO NEW MEMBERS]
Welcome to Crescent Book Club, where you get to share your stories and exchange feedbacks with other members. This book club is for writers who are looking for a more easygoing place to do read-for-reads with valuable comments. Not so much pressure. Minimal requirements. Everyone is welcome, as long as you follow the rules.
Mackenzie's Critique Shop
[PERMANENTLY CLOSED] Want a genuine reader and helpful critiques? In this shop, I offer you helpful advice and outlook on your book, all while commenting and voting! I try my best to read everything in your story, and provide as helpful outlooks on it as I can. Check inside for more details. ... [] OPEN [] CLOSED FOR CATCH UP [] HIATUS [!] PERMANENTLY CLOSEDConcluÃda
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»»----> ððððððð ðð ðððð <----«« ððð¢ðð¢ð§ð ð°ð¢ð¥ð¥ ððšð§ðð¢ð§ð®ð ð¬ðšðšð§. ðð¬ð¬ð®ðŠðð ððšðŠð©ð¥ððð¢ðšð§ ðððð: ð/ð ððšðð¢ð â ðð²ððð« ðððð§ððð¥ðšð§ð. â¢â¢â¢ "ððšðð¢ð," ðð¡ð ððð€ðð¬ ð¡ðð« ð¡ðð§ð ðšðð ð¡ðð« ðððð ðð§ð ð¥ðšðšð€ð¬ ð®ð© ðð ðŠð. "ððŠ?" "ðð ð ðð¬ð€ðð ð²ðšð® ððš ððš ð¬ðšðŠððð¡ð¢ð§ð , ð°ðšð®ð¥ð ð²ðšð®?" ððð« ðððð ððð€ðð¬ ð ð¥ðšðšð€ ðšð ððšð§ðð®ð¬ð¢ðšð§. ð ðð¢ðð ðŠð² ððšð§ð ð®ð ððš ð¡ðšð¥ð ðððð€ ðð«ðšðŠ ð¬ðŠð¢ð«ð€ð¢ð§ð . "ððð¥ð¥, ð²ðð¬," "ððšð®ðð¡ ðŠð," "ðð¡ðð?" ðð¡ð ð¥ðšðšð€ð¬ ððšð°ð§ ðð ðŠð² ððð¡ð¢ð§ð ððšðð€, ðð§ð ð¡ðð« ðððð ðð®ð«ð§ð¬ ð ðððð© ð¬ð¡ððð ðšð ð«ðð. "ððš ð¢ð," ð ð®ð«ð ð ð¡ðð«. ðð¡ð ð¬ð°ðð¥ð¥ðšð°ð¬ ð¡ðð«ð, ðð®ð ð¬ð¡ð ð«ðððð¡ðð¬ ðšð®ð ðð§ð ðŠð² ð¬ðŠð¢ð¥ð ð ð«ðšð°ð¬ ð¬ðš ð°ð¢ðð, ð'ðŠ ð°ðšð«ð«ð¢ðð ðŠð² ðððð ðŠðð² ð ðð ð¬ðð®ðð€ ðð¡ðð ð°ðð².ConcluÃda
The Person Who Makes My Days Brighter
This is a collection of stories, focusing primarily on love in its many forms and the many challenges that come with it.ConcluÃda
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ðððªð®ðð¥ ðšð ðð² ðð«ð«ðð§ð ðð ðð«ð¢ðð: ððŠððð«ð¬ ðšð ððšð¯ð & ððð¯ðð§ð ð ððšðšð€ ð: ðð¡ð ððð£ð©ð®ð ððð ððð²: ððððð¬ ð¢ð§ ð ð¥ððŠðð¬ ð³ððð ðððð ðððð ðð ððð ðððððð ððððð ððððð, ðððððððððð ðððð ððððððððð ððððð ð ðð ððð ððð. ðœððð ðð ðœðððððððð ððððððð ððð ðððððð ðððð ðð ðœðððð ððð ðºððððððð, ððððð ððððð ðððð ðððð ððð ððððððððð ðð ð ðððððð ðððððð ðððð ððð ððððð ðððð . ðððð ðððð ðððð ððððð, ðð ðððð ðððððððððð, ððð ððð ððð ðððð ððððððððð , ð ððððððð ðð ððð ððððððð ððð ððð ððð ðððððð ðððððð ðððððð ðððððððð ðððð ð ðððð. ððð, ððððððð ððð ððððððð ððððð, ðœðððð ðððððð -ðððð ðððððððððð ð ðð ððððððð ððð ðððð, ðð ððð ðºððððððð ðððð ðððð. Copyright © [202
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