Alligiant: how it should have ended
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This is how I think Allegiant should have ended. Tris is alive and is going to have a happily ever after with Tobias. Everybody else who died in the book is dead, except Uriah who did come out his coma.
I hope that you all will enjoy this story as much as I do!
If you have any suggestions, say it and maybe I will use them!
(WARNING: I'm a Dutch girl and I'm not very well in English, will you all please say it when I make a mistake, than can I improve that mistake.)
DISCLAIMER: I don't earn any of the characters, they belong to the fantastic Veronica Roth. The story is mine, and I have copyright on it.
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