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NO SECRET IS SAFE AT PRIMESTONE ACADEMY! Chisimdi's senior year plan was simple: Keep her grades up. Make new friends. Get a boyfriend... maybe Then the first secret was spilled. At the morning assembly, a mysterious figure reveals a classmate's deepest secret and chaos erupts. One by one, hidden truths unravel, and the students of Primestone Academy are left wondering: Who's next? With the principal refusing to act and trust eroding among friends, Chisimdi realizes it's up to her and a band of unlikely allies to uncover the truth. But as they dig deeper, it becomes clear that everyone is hiding something-including themselves. Friendships will fracture. Old wounds will reopen. And with the clock ticking, Chisimdi must decide: Can she expose the culprit without her own secrets coming to light? SECRETS CAN DESTROY YOU. AT PRIMESTONE, THEY CAN RUIN EVERYTHING. Started: 19th October, 2024 Updated every Sundays and Wednesdays #1 teenthriller

لاتقارنين حبي لك بأي مخلوق انا حتى بغيابك احبك by Ot34828

فيصل بحده وعصبيه نطق: ان ماخذيتك وربيتك ماكون ولد محمد الوجد ببرود وعناد : ان مارفضتك ماكون بنت تركي !

The Matchstick Assassin [ONC 2020] by FritztheGrim

Failing her duty as an apprentice Limiren, Valena looks on as the great church bells of Villdesong toll the death of Saint Friar. Killed by an assassins blade. With only a handful of hair and a bruised ego, Valena must work to uncover where the assassin has hidden herself before she and Valena's career disappear completely. But greater events transpire behind the curtain of darkness and only a match sticks flame can suss it out. Valena will have to face what lies just beyond the embers, and take with it the responsibility this knowledge comes with. The Matchstick Assassin was inspired by the Open Novella Contest Prompt #26: Every time she lights a match, she escapes into a new world.

Tenshi is a Hit man that is about to get quite a surprise.... How will she react? Will she be happy, or just shocked? What happens when she meets Inuyasha and Kagome? When Sesshomaru comes to the Village to visit Rin, what will happen? What is going on in her crazy, screwed up life? Read to find out......... I hope you LOVE IT!!!!!!!

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Finding Salaam After Talaq by aishayfaruk

In the enchanting world of northern Nigeria, where the sun casts golden hues on the vast landscapes, lies a tale of love, strength, and the pursuit of inner peace. "Finding Salaam After Talaq" is a journey into the heart of a woman named Fatima Ayn Muhammad, whose life weaves through the complexities of love, loss, and resilience. Within these pages, you will encounter the poignant story of Fatima, a spirited and determined young woman, who finds herself entangled in the web of an abusive marriage. As she grapples with societal pressures and strives for her independence, her path becomes a captivating tale of triumph over adversity. The narrative shifts between the past and the present, where the echoes of her past experiences resonate with her current challenges. As we delve into her journey, we witness her heartache, her courage, and her unwavering determination to create a life of her own. As the story unfolds, we are introduced to the precious gift that emerges amidst the trials-Salaamah, a beacon of hope and love in Fatima's life. With every turn of the page, you will be drawn into a tapestry of emotions, as Fatima navigates the complexities of love, family, and the quest for inner peace. "Finding Salaam After Talaq" is a heartfelt narrative that celebrates the strength of the human spirit and the resilience of a mother's love. It is a tale that embraces the beauty of self-discovery, the power of healing, and the enduring strength of a woman determined to find her way to Salaamah-a journey that will captivate your heart and linger in your soul.

The Boarding House Horror by guywortheyauthor

A much-hated man is found dead, his face twisted into a rictus of horror. Young Inspector Visser can't stand the sight of blood or death, so this case was destined to be a struggle, even before a storm hits. The death occurred in an isolated boarding house on Pluvierstraat, The Hague. Fighting nausea as he examines the body, Visser grudgingly concludes that the death is murder by poison. Which of the motley group of suspects is the killer? The blind woman? The practical jokester? The Italian ex-convict? The English bookie? The scarred railroad engineer? Or could it be the pretty piano teacher? Visser orders them all to stay inside the house as he completes his time-consuming police work. The confinement becomes real when a storm strikes, cutting electricity and telephone. Clues mount and tensions rise, and the murderer among them could kill again. The more clues Visser unravels, the closer he comes to becoming the next victim. ---- I tried to channel Agatha Christie a bit. Okay, more than a bit. This story was longlisted in the 2020 "Open Novella Contest," and won 2nd place in the 2022 Punk Rock Awards, Mystery & Suspense category. Comments welcome!

#27 fanfiction on 15th May 2016 #19 fanfiction on 18th July 2016 #5 fanfiction on 26th July 2016 Written By Rashi

to everything that will, and will not stay the same -- you will find yourself. ࿐ྂ⊹ ꒰ ♯ 𝔟llk/reader . ౨ৎ ꒱ ©iliverae

**Featured on Wattpad @Ambassadors Speculative Fiction 2024, @ScienceFiction Dystopocalypse 2024, @humor Absurdist & Surreal 2024** On January 13, 2029, NASA revealed a dark dwarf planet heading for a collision with the moon. After a month, the impending collision was broadcasted live worldwide. Meanwhile, thirteen-year-old Daniel accidentally injured his pregnant mother, Ynsia, leading to the tragic loss of the baby. Consumed by guilt, he cared for his grieving mother. A year later, Earth began to crumble. The world quaked, cities floated, and the sun's radiation scorched the planet. Amidst the chaos and despair, Daniel discovered friendship and hope. Gale, Daniel's scientist father, alongside the ISS crew and NASA, realized the dire consequences of the moon's absence. They embarked on a mission to revive the moon and save Earth. With a pencil and some leaves of paper, Daniel started writing letters to the lost babe. He named her after the shattered celestial object--Luna, seeking forgiveness and hoping for a chance to reunite his broken family.

|SEASON 1 OF CLAXTON| |WATTPAD CREATORS PROGRAM · WEEKLY TO BI-WEEKLY UPDATES| As the Octopus Man returns from the Bermuda Triangle, Makenna Angelia Delling teams up with Merlin the Great's ninja-like fairy apprentice, Tracey, to defeat him. However, what will happen when Tracey learns he is the K.T. Magic Murderer? *** Fourteen-year-old Makenna Delling is a Metamorphic Fairy, a rare fairy from a family in which one person must have been a fairy. Except, who is that one person? To help find answers regarding her past, Makenna teams up with seventeen-year-old Tracey, a mysterious fairy who hails from Merlin's Island. Together, they are dragged into the flight of their lives after they learn that the Octopus Man has returned from the Bermuda Triangle, and he is eager to kill Tracey. Mustering up all her courage, Makenna must find a way to stop Tracey from becoming who he truly is. She has to help him defeat the Octopus Man himself if he is to change his fate. Both teens have high stakes, especially since Tracey could be one of the greatest threats in the entire Magic World. Who is Makenna? Who is Tracey? Most importantly, why must Makenna find her long-lost family member? It's so she can call herself a True Metamorphic Fairy. *** Note: My writing style resembles screenwriting, so please judge it accordingly. Thank you! Also in this story... Makenna wins the Perfect Ass Award, Tracey the Most Unfortunate One Award-LOL! Current Word Count: 60,000-90,000 Main Achievements: 🏆 2022 Red Carpet Awards Shortlist! 🏆 Most Original Fantasy in the Strawberry Cupcake Awards!

The story is about a very prominent Rajput family in Rajasthan, well-known in their village, and they have a large business empire of the jewelry and gemstones. In the story the female leads are weak and the story is a little toxic and have mild domestic violence if you don't like this kind of story you can skip it,and the images in the story used are from pinterest so all credits go to pinterest.

....I'm actually pretty hilarious. WARNING: This book may be too awesome to handle. Scientists advise for you to wear anti-awesomeness goggles for your own sake. ok I was 10 when I made this book. I also thought I was funny. I am, in fact, haha not funny.

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-PAPER PLANES- ÿøøn.mīn ✔ by shookyoongi_09

Just about paper planes which crashed at Yoongi's apartment, everyday. ~ ❗-ᴛʜɪꜱ ꜱᴛᴏʀʏ ɪꜱ ᴀ ᴘᴜʀᴇ ᴡᴏʀᴋ ᴏꜰ ꜰɪᴄᴛɪᴏɴ ᴀɴʏ ᴛʏᴘᴇ ᴏꜰ ꜱɪᴍɪʟᴀʀɪᴛʏ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴛʜᴇ ʀᴇᴀʟ ᴡᴏʀʟᴅ ꜱʜᴏᴜʟᴅ ʙᴇ ᴄᴏɴꜱɪᴅᴇʀᴇᴅ ᴀꜱ ᴄᴏɪɴᴄɪᴅᴇɴᴄᴇ -❗ -yoonmin fanfic - 𝕾𝖙𝖆𝖗𝖙 𝖉𝖆𝖙𝖊-20 𝕹𝖔𝖛𝖊𝖒𝖇𝖊𝖗 2020 𝕰𝖓𝖉 𝖉𝖆𝖙𝖊- 10 𝕺𝖈𝖙𝖔𝖇𝖊𝖗 2021 🚫𝘿𝙤 𝙣𝙤𝙩 𝙧𝙚𝙥𝙤𝙨𝙩 𝙤𝙧 𝙩𝙧𝙖𝙣𝙨𝙡𝙖𝙩𝙚 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝𝙤𝙪𝙩 𝙢𝙮 𝙥𝙚𝙧𝙢𝙞𝙨𝙨𝙞𝙤𝙣! COVER CREDITS : @_stardusting_bts_

In the distant future, Earth's resources have been plundered and deep-space oil haulers have become the backbone of the solar system's many stations. Henry Starbuck is the first mate onboard such a vessel, the Pequod. He only wants to finish the season and return home to his husband and son. But the captain of the Pequod, Ahab, is a man obsessed with hunting down the vessel which took so much from him. There are legends of his quarry, Moby-Dick: talk from spacefaring astronauts that the ship, shaped like the extinct whales of old, is no longer crewed and is run entirely off a rogue AI programme. Many lives have been lost to it. Starbuck has to confront the terror of space and the awful mania of his captain, all the while dealing with a past which will never leave him alone. He wishes desperately to do what is right. The farthest galaxies are heartless, but no more cruel than the horror that exists inside man. [a sci fi adaptation novella of Herman Melville's Moby-Dick - but no previous knowledge of the book is required] [Updates every Friday from 20/09]

The Night Wolf (Gaara Love story) by SceneDreamXD

I was once part of the Hidden Mist Village, but because of an event that resulted in my family's death when I was 8 years old, I found another Village to live in. The Leaf Village. I am now 17 years old and nobody, but the Hokage knows I am part of this Village and I attempted to keep it that way by only coming out at night, but a boy named Gaara messed all of it up. Now what am I going to do?

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🎵𝙘𝙖𝙣 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙝𝙚𝙖𝙡 𝙢𝙚, 𝙞𝙛 𝙮𝙤𝙪 𝙘𝙖𝙣𝙩 𝙛𝙚𝙚𝙡 𝙢𝙚🎵 After experiencing the worst loss imaginable, Alex made the hard decision to move away to France with her father for undeterminable amount of time After 3 months, she bit the bullet and decided it was time to set foot back into the town that took everything from her. Finally she returns to the small town and discovers what she really left behind. The boy whom she had hoped waited for her and her name on a list with a price beside it. Only back and she is already launched back to the secret world of beacon hills. Her abilities now costed her, her life. Alex fears her name will be erased and money will be handed out With grief on her mind, and fear in her soul. She fights yet another battle of beacon Hills. •𝑆𝑒𝑎𝑠𝑜𝑛 4• 𝐵𝑜𝑜𝑘 𝑡ℎ𝑟𝑒𝑒! 🖤𝑆𝑡𝑖𝑙𝑒𝑠 𝑥 𝑜𝑐🖤

Stars Around Her Scars (Friend Series #1) | ✓ by girlluvspink

Friend Series #1 A HUMSS student, Anastasia Delancy, living in a life that every teenager would want. But behind those was a girl whose thirst for a fatherly attention. In order to get that she needs to compete with the son of her father's friend. Xaven Vior Allejo. With circumstances proving herself, events happen that turned into a plot twist. Will she be able to prove herself until the very end? Or she will let him draw the stars for her scars. TRIGGER WARNING!! THIS STORY CONSIST OF MATURE CONTENT NOT SUITABLE FOR SOME AUDIENCES. PLEASE READ AT YOUR OWN RISK.

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NO SECRET IS SAFE AT PRIMESTONE ACADEMY! Chisimdi's senior year plan was simple: Keep her grades up. Make new friends. Get a boyfriend... maybe Then the first secret was spilled. At the morning assembly, a mysterious figure reveals a classmate's deepest secret and chaos erupts. One by one, hidden truths unravel, and the students of Primestone Academy are left wondering: Who's next? With the principal refusing to act and trust eroding among friends, Chisimdi realizes it's up to her and a band of unlikely allies to uncover the truth. But as they dig deeper, it becomes clear that everyone is hiding something-including themselves. Friendships will fracture. Old wounds will reopen. And with the clock ticking, Chisimdi must decide: Can she expose the culprit without her own secrets coming to light? SECRETS CAN DESTROY YOU. AT PRIMESTONE, THEY CAN RUIN EVERYTHING. Started: 19th October, 2024 Updated every Sundays and Wednesdays #1 teenthriller

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