Black passenger

Black passenger

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I closely inspected her features. Her eyelashes were such a length, nearly touching her eyebrows. And jet black, my favourite colour. "Don't get too carried away eye boggling her will you? Remember the task at hand" The all too familiar voice still sent icy chills, like a jolt of electricity, down my spine. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A creak came from the doorway. A very sketchy looking figure emerged from the darkness outside. He had to duck to prevent his head slamming on the doorframe. The shadow he cast also reflected his tall build. Obviously, he was trying to keep himself unknown to the people around us, so I kept my distance and followed him like a ghost. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ //This my first story so constructive criticism and feedback is more than welcome:-) it is a raw copy, unedited, so expect lots of spelling mistakes!
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Two broken souls in the midst of a crazy world. Two souls running away from their past. There was no light at the end of the tunnel. The tunnel was cracking, slowly closing in. When these two connect, as if they were set on the same path, light creeps in through the cracks, and for or a moment, the tunnel seems to have a way out, but what if it collapses before they make it? - "You saved my life." The words come out as a whisper, I've been dying to say that. I thank god every day that he came into my life when he did. "Fuck Vivian, you don't know how much I needed you." I tear up just a little as he speaks, I don't know the last time I cried happy tears. I bring my hands up to cup his cheeks, resting my forehead against his. "No matter how much I push, I don't mean it. Please don't give up on me." My words seem to relieve him in some way as I feel his shoulders relax. "Even when I'm gone, I'll be by your side, forever." He brings his hand, sticking his pinky out. "pinky promise."I wrap mine around his, placing a kiss on his lips. Warning before you read!! This is my first book! This book will contain topics of SA, eating disorders, and mature content, if any of these things may bother you in anyway, please scroll! I hope when I finish this book I can public a clean version, with a different perspective leaving out these topics, but for now, this is how i've envisioned this story to go! Enjoy -Ash🌸

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